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The Dojo 2: Electric Boogaloo

#1 User is offline   Covenant Icon

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Posted 07 June 2017 - 07:51 PM

THE DOJO 2:
ELECTRIC BOOGALOO


"No matter how much experience you have, there’s always something new you can learn and room for improvement."
-- Roy T. Bennett

"No matter how good you get you can always get better, and that's the exciting part."
-- Tiger Woods

"We make our discoveries through our mistakes; we watch one another's success; and where there is freedom to experiment there is hope to improve."
-- Arthur Quiller-Couch

"You cannot allow your desire to be a winner to be diminished by achieving success before and I believe there is room for improvement in every sportsman."
-- Lionel Messi

"The biggest room in the world is the room for improvement."
-- Helmut Schmidt



Oftentimes, the fantastic writers of Primetime Championship Wrestling struggle with breaking through glass ceilings, getting over that hump, besting that plateau. Just as often, the description/feedback in the What We Said threads are not nearly enough feedback or in-depth enough for the loser of a given match (or even the winner, for that matter) to make the necessary improvements and not make the same mistakes again. Furthermore, it seems to be difficult to get people to give feedback on one's own volition, which makes improvement difficult. Peer reviewing is an important part of the revision process and an even more important facet of improving and developing as a writer and RPer.

When I was Vin Gerard here, I had nearly four times as many losses as wins. Plain and simple and in short, I wasn't very good. I never got enough feedback and never was able to make the necessary corrections until a few of the veterans of the business really took me under their wing. With this Dojo, my intention is to alleviate the lack of feedback and help each and every person, novice or legend, to improve and continue to contribute to making PCW the single best efed in existence.

In keeping with this, you may reply in this topic using the below application, and one of the mentors (listed below the template) will, as promptly as able, volunteer to assist you. The template asks that you list the characters you currently portray, link the most recent RP as each of the aforementioned characters, then any specific RP for one or more of the same characters that you'd like feedback on (such as a loss you thought you should have won, or something to that effect), any specific areas you can come up with for yourself, whether you'd like your mentor's response to you given through PM or just posted here in the Dojo thread itself.

[font=georgia][indent][b][color=steelblue]Current Character(s):[/color][/b] Answer
[b][color=steelblue]Last Roleplay (As Each Character):[/color][/b] Answer
[b][color=steelblue]Any Specific Roleplay (For CC):[/color][/b] Answer
[b][color=steelblue]Desired Improvement Area(s):[/color][/b] Answer
[b][color=steelblue]PM/In-Thread-Reply (Preference):[/color][/b] Answer
[b][color=steelblue]Other Comment(s) (Optional):[/color][/b] Answer[/indent][/font]


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Name: Kyle
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Best Known Characters: Jay Briscoe, AJ Styles, Mr. Anderson (ICW), MVP (ICW)
RPing Experience: 10 Years
Staff Experience: 8+ Years
Status: Full Time

Name: Tom
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Best Known Characters: THE Brian Kendrick, Dolph Ziggler, Kevin Owens, Bobby Roode
RPing Experience: 11+ Years
Staff Experience: 9+ Years
Status: Full Time

Name: Russ
Display Name: Max Black
Best Known Characters: The Hurricane, Taylor Wilde, Raquel Diaz
RPing Experience: 7+ Years
Staff Experience: 6+ Years
Status: Full Time

Name: Zach
Display Name: Uncle Drew
Best Known Characters: Sterling James Keenan, The Rock, Kurt Angle, Jeff Hardy, Finn Bálor, Austin Aries
RPing Experience: 9+ Years
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Status: Full Time


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Posted 07 June 2017 - 08:17 PM

Current Character(s): Bray Wyatt & Dean Ambrose
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): Wyatt | HERE -- Ambrose | N/A
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): N/A
Desired Improvement Area(s): Anything.
PM/In-Thread-Reply (Preference): Discord PM or via PM on the site.
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Posted 07 June 2017 - 08:59 PM

Current Character(s): Becky Lynch
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): PPV Last Turmoil RP
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): N/A
Desired Improvement Area(s): Any areas you seeing lacking or areas I need some improvement.
PM/In-Thread-Reply (Preference): PM/Discord, whatever
Other Comment(s) (Optional): Looking for some honest feedback on areas that could use improvement. Things like content, if the use of accent, at times, is too much, etc.

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 04:16 AM

Current Character(s): Damien Sandow
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): Beyond Repair
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): The latest one, if possible.
Desired Improvement Area(s): Kind of just looking for a spark, and some genuine thoughts on this. I wasn't sure if I went too hard on the character here, and the feedback left for it was less than detailed. I'm also not sure where to go from here, and don't want to be stuck in a loop of close losses like I was with D-Von years ago.
PM/In-Thread-Reply (Preference): Whatever's easiest.
Other Comment(s) (Optional): I may even be asking for feedback\general coaching here for nothing, seeing as some of you feel I'm more than set with the character, and I might have to be putting him on the shelf because of work soon. But, I'm definitely curious about this role play, if only because it was different from everything I've done with him before.

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  • Weight:222 lb. / 102 lb. / 330 lb.
  • Finisher:Frog Splash, Blackout / Twisted Bliss, Spiked DDT / Cliffhanger, Deadline
  • Record:25-22-0 / 4-2-0 / 0-0-0

Posted 08 June 2017 - 06:25 PM

View PostOddgkin, on 08 June 2017 - 04:16 AM, said:

Current Character(s): Damien Sandow
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): Beyond Repair
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): The latest one, if possible.
Desired Improvement Area(s): Kind of just looking for a spark, and some genuine thoughts on this. I wasn't sure if I went too hard on the character here, and the feedback left for it was less than detailed. I'm also not sure where to go from here, and don't want to be stuck in a loop of close losses like I was with D-Von years ago.
PM/In-Thread-Reply (Preference): Whatever's easiest.
Other Comment(s) (Optional): I may even be asking for feedback\general coaching here for nothing, seeing as some of you feel I'm more than set with the character, and I might have to be putting him on the shelf because of work soon. But, I'm definitely curious about this role play, if only because it was different from everything I've done with him before.



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Posted 08 June 2017 - 09:16 PM

If no one has taken Alyssa, I'll take her.
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Posted 09 June 2017 - 05:28 AM

View PostCaptain Greed, on 07 June 2017 - 08:17 PM, said:

Current Character(s): Bray Wyatt & Dean Ambrose
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): Wyatt | HERE -- Ambrose | N/A
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): N/A
Desired Improvement Area(s): Anything.
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I'll take ya'.
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Posted 09 June 2017 - 04:47 PM

Since Tim quit, I'll take Alyssa if she doesn't mind :)
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  • Height:6'2" / 5'1" / 6'4"
  • Weight:222 lb. / 102 lb. / 330 lb.
  • Finisher:Frog Splash, Blackout / Twisted Bliss, Spiked DDT / Cliffhanger, Deadline
  • Record:25-22-0 / 4-2-0 / 0-0-0

Posted 12 June 2017 - 06:59 PM

View PostOddgkin, on 08 June 2017 - 04:16 AM, said:

Current Character(s): Damien Sandow
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): Beyond Repair
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): The latest one, if possible.
Desired Improvement Area(s): Kind of just looking for a spark, and some genuine thoughts on this. I wasn't sure if I went too hard on the character here, and the feedback left for it was less than detailed. I'm also not sure where to go from here, and don't want to be stuck in a loop of close losses like I was with D-Von years ago.
PM/In-Thread-Reply (Preference): Whatever's easiest.
Other Comment(s) (Optional): I may even be asking for feedback\general coaching here for nothing, seeing as some of you feel I'm more than set with the character, and I might have to be putting him on the shelf because of work soon. But, I'm definitely curious about this role play, if only because it was different from everything I've done with him before.



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Posted 14 June 2017 - 08:24 PM

Current Character(s): Ethan Page
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): #001 "He shall bruise your head"
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): N/A
Desired Improvement Area(s): I mainly want to work on the length of my RP's. How can I make something that is both long enough to be a good read while still keeping up the quality?
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  • Record:25-22-0 / 4-2-0 / 0-0-0

Posted 14 June 2017 - 08:27 PM

View PostAlaskanDestroyer, on 14 June 2017 - 08:24 PM, said:

Current Character(s): Ethan Page
Last Roleplay (As Each Character): #001 "He shall bruise your head"
Any Specific Roleplay (For CC): N/A
Desired Improvement Area(s): I mainly want to work on the length of my RP's. How can I make something that is both long enough to be a good read while still keeping up the quality?
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Other Comment(s) (Optional): Not really, just thank you for doing this



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Posted 14 June 2017 - 10:14 PM

I can also help out every now and then, but I mostly regurgitate things TJ taught me.
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Posted 15 June 2017 - 05:57 PM

View PostAlaskanDestroyer, on 14 June 2017 - 08:24 PM, said:

Current Character(s): Ethan Page
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Desired Improvement Area(s): I mainly want to work on the length of my RP's. How can I make something that is both long enough to be a good read while still keeping up the quality?
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Posted 01 July 2017 - 10:41 PM

Current Character(s): Sasha Banks/Johnny Gargano
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Desired Improvement Area(s): More so a focus on Johnny and building a better character with him. More personal touches and so on.
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Other Comment(s) (Optional): I kind of have an idea on how I want to handle Sasha but I would take any input on her too. It's more so Johnny I'm trying to focus and develop since Sasha is already there.

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Posted 08 July 2017 - 11:18 AM

Current Character(s): Jack Gallagher & Pentagon Dark
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Desired Improvement Area(s): Lucha Underground TV scenes/ anything you can suggest
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Other Comment(s) (Optional): Penta is such a brilliant character to write with, and as I shake off my rust I know there's something very exciting brewing here. But I'd like some opinions on how he reads so far, and most importantly, on the Lucha Underground TV quality scenes I've been able to use him in. vs. Punk has been the most creative one so far, and considering some of the plans I have for him, I'd be grateful for any insight anyone could offer on where he is atm.

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